Sunday, September 14, 2014

Snippet Sunday: The Odd Couple

Another passage from our manuscript; this has Chloe and Gabriel talking about their friends. Chloe is explaining to him about her best friend Dana.



 
“When I moved to New York, it was too expensive to live alone at first, so I started looking for a roommate. Dana was looking for one as well.”
Gabriel smiled at the thought. “You and Dana were roommates?”
“For almost three years,” Chloe told him.
“I'll bet that was interesting.”
“It wasn't easy at first. We were like The Odd Couple,” Chloe remembered. “I was Felix and Dana was Oscar.”

6 comments:

  1. They may not LOOK like Felix and Oscar, but....

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  2. Great lead-in to the story of your odd couple. Nicely done.

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  3. Interesting start to become best friend, at least they don't hate each other out of it.

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