“Hello there, Terry,” Gabriel greeted his friend.
“Hello yourself, you young bastard,” Terry said with
a grin, his Scots accent as distinctive as ever. He rose from the chair,
extended a hand, and Gabriel shook it, smiling.
Gabriel made a show of looking at
his watch. “As punctual as ever, I see,” Gabriel remarked,
teasing him.
“Some of us didn’t have that far to come, so we left
late,” Terry replied with a straight face. “Helen sends her love. She’s
busy marking papers and terrorizing the second year students. She’ll come down
next weekend. Have you eaten?”
I've always liked this scene!
ReplyDeleteTerry is quite a character.
ReplyDeleteGood.... You've got both of their essences in a just a couple of lines.
ReplyDeleteStrong dialogue exchange introducing personalities. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI love the banter. (I have a friend who is almost never on time.)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the snippet and the easy banter between the characters. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI can hear the Scots accent in the writing. Nicely done, Scarlett and James.
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