Another snippet from the midst of our manuscript; this has Chloe looking at a watch in a shop and contemplating buying it as a gift for Gabriel.
It would be perfect
for Gabriel, he travels so much, Chloe was thinking. She looked at the
man and smiled. “I’ll be back.”
“Let me give you my
card,” he said, handing her his business card.
“Thank you.”
As Chloe left the
store, she was mentally debating. The watch is perfect for him. But it’s
also very expensive. Would he be uncomfortable with such an expensive gift from
me?
She started to laugh
aloud. I’m having sex with the man, but here I am, trying to decide the
appropriateness of an expensive gift. I must be nuts! As she continued to
laugh uncontrollably, people on the street started to stare at her….
Fun snippet, Scarlett and James. :)
ReplyDeleteWe had fun writing it!
ReplyDeleteIt's a reasonable concern... she doesn't want him to feel like a kept man.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good question, some guys can't take expensive gifts.
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