Sunday, December 1, 2013

Snippet Sunday: Provocative Images

Snippet Sunday is a group at Facebook where members post ten lines from one of their works. We thought we'd post this piece from Same Time Tomorrow,  with one of our protagonists, Gabriel, getting a surprise on his mobile from Chloe, the woman he's involved with, while the two of them are separated by an ocean...


The first image featured Chloe nude, reclining in bed, looking directly at the camera, her eyes lustful, her body inviting. He gasped. Oh my indeed… The next images featured her fondling herself, caressing her breasts, as if he was there, as if he was the one doing that. He stepped out of the church, briefly remembering where he was, coming out onto the front steps. He clicked on the next images, seeing her touching herself, sliding two fingers inside… Gabriel ached to be there, to be in her bed… to have her here… to make love with her.
He reluctantly closed the attachments, would look forward to seeing them on his laptop later. Cold water until then, lad, he told himself with a smirk. What a woman, he thought. And how lucky I am to have her…

4 comments:

  1. Yep...this will be a real attention-getter....

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  2. Raised eyebrows definitely comes to mind with this one...

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  3. I love the fact that he opened the attachments while he was in church! LOL

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