Today from our manuscript, we have a passage picking up precisely from where we left off last week.
They glanced at the others,
but no one was looking their way. Once again, the elevator stopped, and the
first woman stepped out. We’re almost there, he thought, letting his
hand roam over her, anticipating being alone with her.
The bell rang softly, and
the doors opened for the fifteenth floor. Chloe took his hand, and one of the
two remaining women stepped out, followed by them.
The woman walked down to the right, and Chloe
turned that way too. Well, so much for a little time together in the hall, he
thought, rolling his eyes. Come on, it’s not far now. Unless that woman is a
roommate Chloe never mentioned. He smirked, and Chloe looked at him,
arching her head up, kissing him on the cheek.
Ah the eternal hope (and fantasy) for multiple partners. Good snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
ReplyDeleteAnticipation!
ReplyDeleteKudos to you.
I can feel his building impatience. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteUt-oh...
ReplyDeleteHe sure is in a hurry. So much anticipation in here.
ReplyDeleteOh the sweet anticipation...
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